Tuesday 11 February 2014

My Magic Box

I will put in my box

A crystal fresh crispy mint leaf,
A far blown away breeze from the Amazon rainforest,
The swish of an Antarctic storm.

I will put in the box

A blazing golden, red, orange legendary feather from the first Phoenix,
The bright lighting of Zeus,
Athena's majestic powers,

I will put in the box

The sound of paint squirting out of a paint bottle,
The glistening lights of Paris seen from an airplane in the pitch black,
The prrrrr of  the first cat ever.

My box is fashioned from the lights of Eiffel Tower,
rare sea stones 
and protected with shimmering green exotic vines of the Amazon rainforest. 

I shall use Athena's powers and swing on the vines like Tarzan.

8 comments:

  1. Great poem, Sanika! Did you write this one at home?

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  2. well done sanika this is amazing! maby you could add a simile. (my favorite part is a blazing golden, red, orange legendary feather from the first Phoenix)
    from your quad blog friend sam.

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  3. amazing poem, Sanika! Did you write this on your own. If you did your amazing at writing poem. Perhaps you could add a similie.

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  4. Wow Sanika that is an amazing poem. I really like your description because it sounds so imaginative.

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  5. Amazing work :D (sorry if this does not appear a face) ! I love the idea of the greek God !I love the idea of the things ou want to put in the box :)

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  6. Your poem is WONDERFUL Sanika!!!!!!!!!!

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