Tuesday 10 September 2013

Cristina's pebble and poem

Here's Cristina's pebble and the poem she wrote at home:
You are my first pebble. I found
you at the park. I
saved your life.
Now you are nice
and safe with me.

You are small
as small
as a baby 
chick
you could
grow big
like a 
giant.
In the water you
shine like a star.

2 comments:

  1. I like the simile you have used - 'as small as a baby chick'. Great poem Cristina.

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  2. I loved your poem Cristina!! I liked wen you said "You shine like a star" Maria

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