And after all these brilliant box poems, we created some real boxes with lots of the things we would put in, loosely based on the poems - see these blog posts on the Y4 blog.
Monday, 24 March 2014
My Magic Box
By Vega
I will put in my box
The most beautiful tale in Europe,
The soft white snow underneath my feet,
Touching the sea from a boat.
I will put in my box
The sweetest strawberry in the land,
A delicious red cherry for me,
The blue-green colour of the sea.
I will put in my box
Colours from a rainbow,
A visit from a friend from another country,
A leaving present if you go abroad.
I will put in my box
A Chinese blossom tree,
A fallen leaf,
A windy day.
My box is fashioned from a sari in blue tones, it has golden
fishes on it and a lot of yellow flowers.
My Magic Box
By Tino
I will put in my box
I will put in my box
A giant mountain full of hard crunchy
snow,
Monsters made from shining ice,
A giant blue yeti.
I will put in my box
Living snow men with arms made of wood
and icicle teeth,
Avalanches falling from everywhere,
Lego star wars and a giant crocodile
eating everything in their path.
Lots of Lord of the Rings and Hobbit
Lego.
I will put in my box
Soldiers and armies walking,
Gandalf the white and the grey,
Mordor rolling half of the universe.
I will put in my box
A volcano made out of chocolate,
Green, red and brown dinosaurs scaring
everyone,
Dragons and the giant Lockness monster.
My box is fashioned with a scary face
and the body of a gigantic wolf. It has lots of padlocks on it to stop anyone
from stealing it and controlling the universe.
My Magic Box
By Sara
I will put in my box
The breath of a
dragon in the mountains,
The fur of a
giant panda,
The sharp tooth
of an ice mountain wolf.
I will put in my box
The taste of
creamy melted white chocolate,
The world’s
biggest ice-cream,
The world’s
largest most beautiful flower.
I will put in my box
My amazing favourite collection
of books,
My favourite colourful hand bang,
And the biggest lollipop in the
whole world.
My box is fashioned from sparling
rubies and shimmering diamonds.
My Treasure Box
By Tobias
I will put in my box
A crazy dream of a giant roller-coaster
Children laughing in the playground
The colours of a clear rainbow
I will put in my box
My best and revered moves
All of my friendship
My happiest memories
like when I was a baby and my mum was holding me
A place magical in the mountains
I will put in my box
A crazy dream of a giant roller-coaster
Children laughing in the playground
The colours of a clear rainbow
I will put in my box
My best and revered moves
All of my friendship
My happiest memories
like when I was a baby and my mum was holding me
A place magical in the mountains
My Box
By Ryan
I will put in the box
The Twin Towers from New York
A comet from the deepest part of space
An America eagle flying over the Grand Canyon
I will put in the box
My cat’s super soft calico fur
The beautiful aquamarine Maldives water
A field covered with snow
I will put in the box
The best sushi in all of Japan
A veggie burger from Washington D. C.
Pizzas from Pisa
I will put in the box
The feeling of being in the cockpit of the F14 tom cat
The dream of me flying over the Himalayas
Me as a magnificent white swan
My box is fashioned from rubies, emeralds, sapphires,
diamonds and topazes
The hinges are made out of gold
With a big diamond on the top.
I will keep it safe in my bedroom
Let no one see it
It will always be my box.
My Box
By Rozenn
I will put in my
box
Thousands of multi-coloured
baby elephants
That comes from Africa
A pink humming
bird from the forest in the south of England
I will put in
my box
The wave-washed
beach of Miami
And the chief
roller-coaster
The sight of the
Egyptian statue
The pleasure
of an African little girl
I will put in
my box
The sun rising
behind the Pyrenees
And the wonderful
smell of red roses
Peace on an
island with a smoothie
A water fight
in my own back garden
I will keep my
box
In my safe
keeping
My Box
By Penny
I will put in to my box
A golden sunrise other the bluest sea
My reflection shining in the river
The light on the snow
I will put in to my box
The smell of a beautiful yellow rose
That lovey smooth feel in between your hands
I will put in to my box
the rubyest, sweetest strawberries
a chocolate waterfall with marsh pads on it
a jelly palace (mmm, how delicious!)
I will put in to my box
the colours of the rainbow
the glow of my heart
the rain from my eyes
The Magic Box
By Sanika
I
will put in the box
The
shimmering turquoise colour of the Pacific Ocean ,
The
fluffiest fluff of cloud from heaven,
The
greenery of the woods with a crystal blue lake.
I
will put in my box
The
feel of the rough net of an Anar Kali,
The
smell of rose candles melting,
The
sound of a silky harp.
I
will put in my box
A
sudden crunch of cream and onion chips,
The
squeak of an oily saucisson de Toulouse,
Fresh
salty sushi going in my mouth.
I
will put in my box
A
bright summer’s day in the woods,
The
bluest drop of water from lake Lucerne,
The
whitest frost of Antarctica.
I
will put in my box
Me
relaxing on a warm comfy bed with rose
petals on it,
The
freshness of the mountain stream,
A secrete chamber made from amber.
My
box is fashioned from gold, silver,
bronze and platinum with a carved
butterfly,
With
some jades, jaspers rose quartz and emeralds.
I
shall swim in a crystal blue lake
with a secrete chamber
leading to precious stones
and jewel world.
My Magic Box
I will put in the box
A sparkling sunset with a pearl sun,
A silky feel of a piece of a stem of a bamboo tree,
A world full of snow and art.
By Niamh
I will put in the box
A slice of cheese pizza made by my mum,
A slice of Victoria sponge made by mum,
My cute and soft elephant treasure.
I will put into the box
A rainbow rain storm in the winter,
A cute baby elephant under a diamond waterfall,
The sound of the song called Relax, take it easy by Mika.
I will put into the box
A gianormous hug from Joshua (my brother),
A butterfly going throw a waterfall in Andorra,
I would like to go scuba diving in the Atlantic Ocean.
My box is fashioned from silk of the stem of a banana tree with hinges
that are made from my dad’s fingers. It also has rubies, diamonds, love hearts
and stars for the decoration of the box.
I shall look after my pets my rabbit called Spotty,
my dog which
is a scotty dog and it is called Cutie,
my baby turtle called Turquoise,
my
baby elephant called Sparkly in Pet Lagoon!
My Magic Box
By Matias
I will put in the box
My favourite Lego star
wars character Luke Skywalker,
The best Minecraft video
game for X box,
Captain Rex’s Lego Star Wars
space ship.
I will put in the box
The smell of a revving motorbike,
The smell of a new thing,
The smell of a new book.
I will put in the box
A star wars dream and I
will be Luke Skywalker.
A dream about a gigantic
beast that is trying to kill me.
A dream about Minecraft.
I will put in the box
An exciting dream,
Lots of fun games,
A yummy pizza.
The Magic Box
By Maria
I will put in my box
The sight of the snowy tops of
the Pyrenees,
The sight of a field with
Lotus flowers starting to open,
The sight of a sunset near the
beach.
I will put in my box
The smell of evaporating water
from the Atlantic Ocean,
The sound of a galloping
horse,
The texture of the smooth fur
of my white rabbit
I will put in my box
The chocolate fondant melting
in my mouth!!
A sip of the translucent waters
of the river Lucerne,
An apple crumble crumbling in
my mouth.
I will put in my box
The ruby red cherries from my garden
lightened by the sun in summer,
Red, yellow, brown and orange
leaves falling from the trees in autumn,
Blossoming roses in spring!!!
I will put in my box
The feeling of the sun on my
face,
The dream of having my own
horse,
The feeling of happiness.
I will put in my box
An enormous waterfall with its
water spraying my face,
Firefly’s flying across the
river Garonne,
Spider webs iced in winter.
My box is fashioned with
delicate crystal,
It has a special key to open
it,
It has a really special button to transform my
box into a horse.
Multi-coloured stripes!!
I will horse ride with my box
whenever I want.
My Special Golden Treasure Box
I will put in my box
The sunset
The sound of violins
playing a sonata of Vivaldi.
The smell of hot chocolate
drifting through the air.
I will put in my box
A Sunday roast with
Yorkshire pudding. Scrumptious!
Cherry Sunburst destroying
villages.
The blossomy spring breeze
making a Pacific wind.
I will put in my box
Entering my stories in
real life (Crime at the Guggenheim),
The feeling of people
celebrating, enjoying life at parties
A staring snow leopard,
his breath frozen with glittery frostiness,
I will put in my box
The mountain falls of the
north Pyrenees, the Garonne collapsing toward the sea,
A portal leading to
Neptune, or Jupiter or Outer Space,
The moon shining in the
night with the peaceful vague trees.
My box is made from
crystal-ice mirrors.
It reflects in the light
every day in winter,
The avalanche will come to
you if you open it.
Then obscurity will spread
through your body.
I will show my box to Mr
Gregg and Mrs Baldwin
And to all IST and I will
make a feast with lots of people
And give things to the
poor.
My treasure box
By Mimi
I will put in my box
A blazing feather of a phoenix,
A ribbon made of the colours of rainbows,
The golden horn of a unicorn.
I will put in my box
The sound of the rustling leaves in a damp
rainforest,
The smell of paint as it splashes on a
shiny canvas,
The feel of the warm silky fur of a
month-old puppy.
I will put in my box
The rushing colours of the wind,
A lightning storm, crashing thunder from
the sky,
The cherry colour of sunrise and sunset.
I will put in my box
A million shards of violet-flavoured candy,
A runny yolk of an egg and the crisp sides
of bacon on a plate,
A bowl full of fresh berries and whipped
cream.
My box is carved out of the oldest oak
wood,
The lock is made of jade coloured dragon
eye stones,
The hinges are fashioned out of delicate
autumn-brown pebbles,
The key is made out of dreams and is shaped
like a cerulean-coloured dragon,
Nobody knows that at night it comes alive
and guards my small chest.
I shall sometimes step into my box,
Inside, it is always night,
A silhouette of a grey wolf howling at the
blue corn moon,
A field of glowing fuchsia and indigo
orchids,
Tiny dragons with wings of rainbow hues,
singing and humming a beautiful lullaby to each other,
And a giant peach tree, the blossoms
swaying in the cool breeze.
Maia's Box
By Maia
I
will put in the box
An erupting
volcano a thousand metres high
My
guinea-pigs Buster and Ratatouille
And
Italy seen from space
I
will put in the box
A
lake at the end of China with the smell of sea
And
the smell of a dreaming horse
The
smell of my mum’s quiche
I
will put in the box
My cushy
brownie cake
And
my dad’s fish lasagne
And a
Christmas roast diner
I
will put in the box
To
slide down waterfall like a Spanish dragon
And
to ride on my friend, Clara’s horse
To swish
down a giant water slide
My
box is made of…
My
Mother’s lovely smoothness
And
the hearts of my school friends
A
Panda that has never been seen before
I
will throw my box down a giant mounting
Put
a secret door in it
And bury
it safe for ever and ever
The Magic Box
By Luis
I will put in my box
My special golden Karate
trophy,
My lovely white smooth dog
on earth,
A relaxing clear blue
ocean.
I will put in my box
Being cool, great, happy
in Karate,
Eating the best crunchy margarita
pizza with tomatoes, cheese and red salami,
Going to the highest part
of the Pyrenees and jumping from one big rock to another.
I will put in my box
Running through the
crunchy snow throwing snow balls at each other,
A big sweet apple, so
sweet that your mouth waters,
The awesome Lego batman
game that makes you very crazy running through the house!
My box is fashioned from
strong gold ice,
With four strong locks and
shiny colourful diamonds,
A secret pathway, only I
know the way!
My Magic Box
By Irene
I will put in my box
I will put in my box
Fun
that I had when I was younger,
The
red sun sinking into the blue sea,
A sip
of the bluest deepest water.
I
will put in my box
The
feel of soft smooth fur from a Tiger,
Playing
among my dreams with wild lions,
Swimming
with giant dolphins on another world.
I
will put in my box
The
sweetest raspberries on earth,
The
smell of tulips,
The
texture of a panda’s fur.
I
will put in my box
The
tooth of a dragon,
The
swish of the trees in the wind,
The
feel of the clouds.
My
box is fashioned from gold, silver and diamonds,
With
pearls on the lid and wolfs on the corners,
Its
hinges are the secret doors that lead me to other worlds.
I
will play in my box
In
the biggest forest of China,
And play
with golden Pandas
The colour
of the sun.
My Magic Box
By Eli
I will put in my
box
The high white snowy
mountains of the Pyrenees,
The wild green
forest of the Amazon,
The wild west in the shimmering heat.
I will put in my box
The feel of my
rough toy sheep,
The sound of crumbly smoked bacon crisps,
The smell of a tiger ,a very lovely tiger.
I will put in my box
The slurping sound of a magical cherry coca cola fountain,
Cherry flavoured sweets shaped like cherries,
Multi fruit flavoured bubble gum.
I will put in my box
A blue summer sky with the sun peeking through the clouds,
A red romantic sky with heart shaped clouds
whispering love,
An orangey red sky, sunset heaven.
My box is fashioned from
Magical things like unicorns and wands,
Carved iron and wood,
A baby’s love.
I shall do in my box
I would horse ride around a lagoon of dolphins
with my box in my saddlebag,
Before swimming in the lemon scented pool.
My Magic Box
By David
I will put in my box.
The gold coins of the golden
king of the USA,
The smell of a rose.
The body of a T. Rex
I will put in my box
Bamboo from china,
The world of Lego,
The best pirate ship.
My box is made of silver
monsters and gold.
My Box
By Jacques
I will put in the box
I will put in the box
Potions of regeneration
And splash potions of harming
And the magic of the world
I will put in the box
The sound of tiny flames
Everest from the snowy
Himalayas
I will put in the box
Angry feelings
And weird dreams
And I will put the snowy
Pyrenees
I will
put in the box
The
last Emperor of Japan
And
the sword of a Chinese Ninja
And
honesty
My box is formed with diamonds
And gold
With solid silver
Some of it is pewter
And it
is also made out of glass
I will
hide my box in a secret cavern
And
two mechanical magna guards will keep an eye on it.
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