My Treasure Box

By Tobias

I will put in my box

A crazy dream of a giant roller-coaster

Children laughing in the playground

The colours of a clear rainbow



I will put in my box

My best and revered moves

All of my friendship

My happiest memories

like when I was a baby and my mum was holding me



A place magical in the mountains

My Dragon

By Tobias

My dragon is made of the sun.
He likes to sleep in lava.
At the end of his tail there is a flame.

He has spikes on his back made of larva.
When he wakes up his eyes glimmer like the sunrise,
When he breathes fire his tummy glows,
His razor-sharp claws cut through walls.
His colour is as green as fresh grass.

Revolting Rhymes - Jack and The Bean Stalk

Jack and his Mum did not have any money, so his Mum sent him off to sell the cow for £100.
Jack goes off with the cow but trades her in for just a useless bean, or that's what his Mum thought, and she throws it out of the window onto the rubbish dump. After that she smacks his bottom with the handle of the vacuum cleaner. She was really cruel to Jack and calls him a lunatic.

But suddenly overnight the bean became a giant beanstalk, and in the morning Jack shows it to his Mum, and at the top there are solid gold leaves. When she sees the leaves, she yells at Jack to go and get the golden leaves, because she suddenly realises they will have lots of money if they get them.

Jack climbs up, but he hears a giant thunderous sound saying ' Fee Fy Fo Fum I smell the blood of an Englishman '

Jack rushes down in half a tick and tells his mum that the giant can smell him and that he had a clever nose. His Mum tells him he stinks and needs a bath, but Jack says 'if you are so clean why don't you climb up the beanstalk ?' So she does. Then she gets eaten up straight away by the giant !! Jack doesn't cry when the giant eats his Mum.

Jack then goes and has a bath, brushes his teeth, washes his hair, blows his nose, and comes out smelling like a rose. Jack climbs the beanstalk again, and takes lots of golden leaves. He reckons he will have a bath every day as it seems to pay off.


What I think about this Poem ...

I like this poem because it always rhymes at the end of the lines. There are lots of versions of this story, but this one has rhymes in it and it's funny. Jack's Mum is really cruel, even after the beanstalk grows and she sees the golden leaves, and Jack is only so stinky because his mum makes Jack do almost all the work.

This kind of poem is fun, but a bit cruel and naughty with a few nasty words. I suppose that is why it's in a book called Revoltnig Rhymes'!

  

haiku

It tickles my hand

It’s like a small ladybird.

Go back to your tree.

Rozenn

Red spotty firebug,

You look like a ladybird,

You have lovely spots.

Claudia

Sleepy praying priest,

Wish good luck to the firebug:

Fly baby firebug!

Jacques

It smells like cherry,

Lavender feels soft like fur,

It has flowers on.

Amelia

On the lavender

There is one last small flower

Which is dying now.

Alicia

Olive tree, cold, freeze,

Rosemary, maple tree burns,

Lavender curls up.

Pablo

Bushes that smell nice:

Lavender and Rosemary;

Not those spiky balls.

Tobias

Old olive tree curled,

Enjoying the gentle breeze, 

Sprouting fresh olives.

Mimi

 Light sings through the trees.

Leaves fall with a crunch of bugs.

The bugs are pretty crazy.

Penelope

When the red leaves fall,

The red firebugs fall as well,

And caterpillars.

Cristina

When the leaves fall down

They turn red and yellow up down

There are also fruit.

Maia

The maple is big,

Leaves have only six sides.

See, a spiky ball!

Fernando

Green spikes everywhere,

Maple tree hung with stink bombs:

I gave one to Jacques.

Gustavo

Red maple tree leaf,

Falling on the short green grass,

I take you back home.

Clara

The outline is white.

It looks like it is cracking:

A baby bird’s egg.

Ryan