I will put in my
box
A rainbow with eight
colours in it
A sip of the Atlantic
Ocean
The first tears of a
baby
I will put in my
box
The first snowy day
of winter
The smell of a fresh
yellow rose
The smell of new sea
I will put in my
box
Sand trickling
through my hand
The last bit of the
Titanic
A statue of luck
I will put in my
box
All the rubies in the
galaxy
My pony’s tail
The end of the world!
My box is made of…
The smoothest ice
When opened it turns
to polar bear furs.
Wow Clara! but maybe you could add a complex sentence.
ReplyDeleteCorey
Well done Clara; this is a lovely poem with imaginative vocabulary choices. I particularly like 'all the rubies in the galaxy'.Perhaps you could add some alliteration; this is when words start with the same sound or letter, e.g Whispering words of wisdom. From Miss Friend
ReplyDeleteamazing clara! i love your use of words.
ReplyDeletenext time try to add a simile to say what the rubys look like.
keep up the great work
finlay-orange one-England
Well done Clara! I love how you would put all the rubies in the galaxy and a sip of the atlantic ocean! Next time maybe try to avoid that much repetition
ReplyDeleteMerryn - Orange One - England
Wow Clara! An amazing poem! How about using adverbs to describe what you put in your box.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem Clara!
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