tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396758467471799285.post1295777144841289963..comments2023-05-15T07:16:03.821-07:00Comments on Year 4 Poems: Alicia's BoxMr Gregghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15114830266540886842noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396758467471799285.post-78023501949818841202014-02-15T10:08:38.748-08:002014-02-15T10:08:38.748-08:00I really like your poem Alicia!I really like your poem Alicia!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396758467471799285.post-17046924930003963532014-02-14T06:27:46.177-08:002014-02-14T06:27:46.177-08:00Wow Alicia! Amazing ideas.These are really effecti...Wow Alicia! Amazing ideas.These are really effective sentences that are really detailed too.This is a piece of work that will show younger children what to do. Maybe you could use a similie to compare.<br />Lauren. Orange 1. EnglandLaurenhttp://cpsorange1.primaryblogger.co.uk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6396758467471799285.post-45285081759050644732014-02-14T06:23:31.308-08:002014-02-14T06:23:31.308-08:00Well done Alicia this is amazing! (My favorite par...Well done Alicia this is amazing! (My favorite part is the entry code is made of jelly beans.) maby you could try using a compound sentence.<br />From your quad blog friend Sam. samhttp://cpsorange1.primaryblogger.co.uk/tag/cpsorange1/noreply@blogger.com